Your assignment:
- Each class has it's own page on this site
- Find your class page
- Review the rubric at the top of the page
- Look thru your classes topics by scrolling down the page
- Pick 3 to 5 essays to read
- Read essay and then post a sandwich comment on the website about their paper
- REMEMBER- when posting- no last names and emails are optional....
Writing good comments
When you are sharing your opinion on a classmates paper make sure you:
- Read the whole essay
- Stop and think about what would be helpful to say before you type
- Hit the comment button
- Use the Sandwich compliment strategy- give a compliment, give a suggestion, and then a compliment. (something they should keep doing, something they could change, something they did well)
- Reread what you wrote for spelling, grammar, and thoughtfulness.
Remember to comment on 3 to 5 essays-more if you would like to. :O) Mrs. Frost
Words you can use when telling the writer what worked well
These are some words that you can use when writing your compliments and comments.
Things you might compliment:
Word choices
Figurative language
Use of sources
Topic choice
Organization
Editing
Examples shared
Particular sentence or phrase
Things you might compliment:
Word choices
Figurative language
Use of sources
Topic choice
Organization
Editing
Examples shared
Particular sentence or phrase
Words and Phrases you can use when giving a suggestion
Words to use when sharing your suggestions:
One suggestion I have is....
One thing that would tie your paper together is....
It would of been nice to see/hear more about....
It would make your point more clear if you....
I did not quite understand the part where you wrote...
A suggestion I have is....
More details in paragraph 4 would of really....
It was confusing to me when you...
One suggestion I have is....
One thing that would tie your paper together is....
It would of been nice to see/hear more about....
It would make your point more clear if you....
I did not quite understand the part where you wrote...
A suggestion I have is....
More details in paragraph 4 would of really....
It was confusing to me when you...