The subject was interesting and I thought maybe I could try to make a video game. A little bit more detail about how the software works would have made the paper more informational. Overall the paper gave two ways of entertaining ourselves.
cool! I wonder though, how do download RPG maker? Is minecraft a role playing game? Still, over all it's a good paragraph.:)
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Ari :)
12/11/2013 05:22:51 am
Great job Avery!!!!¡ I would have maybe added that Scratch.com is a great place to make video games and it shows how hard it is as well!still awesome job tho!
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This group of essays were all written by students in 9 to 10 am mt ELA class as part of Unit 3 composition.